1. Salman Agus (SMAN 5 Bukittinggi, XI 1A 2)
One of the judges, Marta Yuliana (Editor of Sampoerna Foundation Publications), commented: "The essay posses a catchy introduction, the points presented are strong and the contents are well-organized. Overall, it's a very good academic essay."
2. A. A. Sg. Dwinta Kuntaladara (SMAN 4 Denpasar, X.6)
" A well structured essay with good arguments and strong conclusion"
3. Erni Yurnita (SMAN 10 Malang, XI IPA 2)
" Good points; good arguments and good ending"
4. Ayu Novitry (SMAN 2 Sekayu, XI 1A 1)
" Unique start, it has lots of good facts, but the ending isn't very good"
5. Ridha Ichsani (SMAN 3 Depok, XI IPS 2)
" Good English, but the introduction is long and less relevant"
6. Kartika Admadhani (SMAN 10 Malang, X.4)
" The essay has good structure, but the summary is not so strong"
Congratulations to the winners!
The prizes will be sent by end of April.
Additionally, all participants will receive a certificate of appreciation from Sampoerna Foundation United Schools Program.
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